September 26th, Saturday 1964
6:06 PM
Today, searched for lil' white girl and black woman. Looked everywhere in Sylvan, they ain't there. Will look for the two tommorow. I'll get some sleep, then look for them again tommorow.
September 27th, Sunday 1964
5:26 PM
Looked for the two again. Never saw them. I swear they must've left the city, but I ain't leaving. It ain't my job to take care of them anymore.
I like how you put the time that he said these things, it seemed like he was reporting back to the station. I'm guessing that this was Shoe, you never specified or made it obvious, was that by design?
ReplyDeleteIs that T-Ray? That's cool how you portrayed T-Rays simplistic writing and mind, and in a journal style!
ReplyDeleteI like how you used a character even though he isn't in the chapters right now
ReplyDeleteI love the writing style, how it shows that Shoe truly doesn't give a damn.
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